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Mereel79
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since 2000-11-27
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Milwaukie, OR, USA

0 posted 2000-11-28 06:03 AM



Watching the tide of scenarios lap against the shores of my mind
I sit and try to remember a different moment in time
When were you not in my heart, in my conscious, in my soul
Believe it or not I’m quite aware of this feeling inside me, even if I’m only 21 years old

Love is what I feel, nothing more nothing less
Will you be in my life, allow me your heart to caress
The future ahead of us is not written in stone
But if we take up the pen together it may have in store us in a place called home

I still find it hard to think of a time when your screen name wasn’t there
But the past matters not, your being here is what brings me to care
Though the miles between us may be great and long
My oath to thee is one day we will come together as one

There is so much more I could say
A witty line, a heart felt truth or even the occasional cliché
But as I breathe to survive this is equally true
Of all the things I reach for, my hand reaches out for you




Our lives are better left to chance I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss the dance

© Copyright 2000 James Ross - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-11-28 06:29 AM


My what an eloquently penned poem!! Beautiful well crafted poetry.....hope you get together .....welcome to Passions!!!   ethome
Mereel79
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since 2000-11-27
Posts 8
Milwaukie, OR, USA
2 posted 2000-11-28 03:02 PM


Thank you, as do I. I tend to believe that anything is possible.

Our lives are better left to chance
I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss the dance

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2000-11-28 03:27 PM


The depth of your emotions and the beauty of your words shows the heart of the person you are. Even the imposible can be posible. Thank you so much for the wonderful read.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

vandana
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4 posted 2000-11-28 05:49 PM


Liked it!!!
LoveBug
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5 posted 2000-11-28 06:10 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!

This is a beautiful piece. Some people think that love can't take place over the internet, but I disagree!! I hope that you get to meet this person someday. Keep up the great work!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2000-11-28 06:17 PM


Love is not limited by age, and I have a pair of friends that met and courted over the internet...been married about 6 years now, quite happily; oh and there's about a 12 year difference in their ages...she's older than him.

Great write...want more.


jwesley

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