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When my time comes
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When my time comes |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
When my time ceases, My last breath exhales, My life force unfurls from this physical shell, I shall face the angel of death, As he swoops down swiftly, Sharpened sickle in hand, Ready to harvest my soul. I shall stand fast, challenge his existence, And challenge the end of my very own. If a battle must be waged, Outside of this world in which we now exist, So be it. I shall not go easy. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Very Very Good! Keep fighting no since giving in too soon!!!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is a lovely verse, I really enjoyed it. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
thanks Inot2b and Irish Rose. Just trying to fit in here. Its kinda scary at first. Ron |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ron this was an interesting concept and very well written...James |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RK~ Definately do not go easy! Loved this -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Thank you James. I appreciate that coming from you. You have great writings. I enjoy them. your heart is true. Thanks. Ron |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Thanks SEA.....I try not to give up the ghost too easily..lol Ron |
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