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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Shards of red-gold wine; pieces of me swept under your covers. I am not unbreakable- though I try. I drank of you, your warmth supposed to heal but you shattered me. These passion scarred fragments ripped from my heart are unlikely to regenerate.. You see, I am not unbreakable. Beware- my red-gold shards may cut you deeper than you planned, though I would not see you bleed. And your pieces of purple steel may join me in hell... [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This piece aches so deeply that I can't even find the words to tell you how it made me feel...my only hope is that through poetry you find the healing that is there waiting for you. Excellent flow of emotion in this~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Sandra, you've expressed your emotions with such impact in this piece ... {{{HUGS}}} to you. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sandra I just want to hug you and say it will be ok..sooner or later..it will be..He is not worthy of you...HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, I'm with Victoria. He is definitely not worthy of you if he could bring you such pain. I know this is easy for me to say right now, but I firmly believe that everything happens for a reason, and you will find the right one someday, who DOES deserve you. Take care, my friend! Great poem! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can only echo what has been said above. . . but do not let your own pieces cut one that might put you back together. . . Excellent writing. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Wow. I think you just said what was on my mind with this. I think we're kindred spirits, suffering the same hell. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I could feel this deep inside my soul.....let your writing heal you; I have found it wonderful therapy..... remember tomorrow truly is another day!!! Hugs, Pepper Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
CatalinaMoon, Time for you to move on before more damage is done. Big hugs for you from the bottom of my heart. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You all are so kind, I am better every day. This support has made all the difference. Sandra |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very well thought out and filled with emotion. Great job! Rich |
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