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SEA
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0 posted 2000-10-19 08:30 AM



Sadness and Heartache
walk hand in hand
such steadfast friends are they
Welcoming~Wanting of company
So understanding, don't you think?
Always willing to say hello
Always close by................
Waiting


-SEA-

*disclaimer~ this has nothing to do with me,I'm very happy  

© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-10-19 08:49 AM


SEA ... what an interesting piece ... they're always waiting in the wings ...
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2 posted 2000-10-19 08:53 AM


Yes they do make a perfect couple don't
they...a fine piece of weave SEA, and your
disclaimer made me  , glad to know your
happy!

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3 posted 2000-10-19 09:06 AM


SEA I really think this is such a good poem, and am I glad you're happy. Still this is a fine piece, very well written, and full of truth too. I however don't expect this particular pair to be visiting me, and before anyone says no one ever does. If however they do turn up, I'll send them off with a flea in their ears.
Take care
                        Marsha
                      
I did say that I like this didn't I? because I do.

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4 posted 2000-10-19 12:46 PM


MA Miller~ thanks, just what was floating around my head last night.  

BDC~ thank you, glad I made you smile  

Marsha~ I sure hope they don't come visiting you.....I personally can't stand the pair!   I'm glad you liked this.  

-SEA

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5 posted 2000-10-19 02:28 PM


A GOOD WRITE SEA
ShortNsweet
A SPLENDID READ
Coco

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6 posted 2000-10-19 02:32 PM


SEA~
Sweet poet ...
it has nothing to do with you -
and yet, it has everything to do with
your caring-for-others heart.

Pretty special it is.
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2000-10-19 02:36 PM


Splendid write, they do seem to go well hand-in-hand don't they, what a profound thought.  I liked.
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8 posted 2000-10-19 02:40 PM


Sea...your sweet poets heart feels even when you are happy...love this girl...
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Coco~ always so nice to me.. thank you  

Marge~thank you so much for the wonderful compliment....I just love you  

Gemini~thank you, I don't think I've ever been accused of a profound thought before, I like it!!  

Paula~ thank you.....it must have been in the air last night.......

-SEA

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10 posted 2000-10-19 06:27 PM


Well, as they say, misery loves company. Good work Sea!

Elizabeth


Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near...
hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com


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11 posted 2000-10-19 07:17 PM


A dynamic duo, indeed, SEA...but they CAN be defeated....and you just did  
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Elizabeth~Yes, thank you for reading  

Balladeer~thank you very much for reading this, it was a nice suprise.  

-SEA

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13 posted 2000-10-19 09:58 PM


Sadness and heartache
walking hand in hand
laughing and smiling
all across this land

Then comes fair maiden
riding upon the white horse
catching the eye of cowboy
with tender love of course

Just one sweet little *sigh*
and the wink in her eye
shuns sadness and heartache
and kisses the passionate cry


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14 posted 2000-10-19 10:01 PM


Mark~ the smile you have given me tonight will last all weekend.You made my toes tingle!   Thank you sweet friend.   -SEA
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15 posted 2000-10-19 10:03 PM


So where is "MY" little *sigh*....I see you gave it to another poet tonight my sweet lil lady of poetic pleasure....hmmmmmmm???
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Maaaarrrrkkkk~ *****SSSSIIIGGGGHHHH*****
will that do?   -SEA

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17 posted 2000-10-19 10:18 PM


Will this do?????

The kiss of SEA's sweet *sigh*
breathing life into the night
as the cowboy catches in his eye
the vision of holding her tight

With arms entwined around paradise
and chest pounding against rested head
surely you must be thinking twice
about the fears that could be shed

Dreams of passion and tender care
as poetic replies turn to loving smiles
knowing friends with words to share
loveing your friendship across the miles

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18 posted 2000-10-19 10:19 PM


Yes

SEA
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Sighs with blushing,ok!? that is beautiful. Thank you.   -SEA
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In the winds of Cherokee song
20 posted 2000-10-19 10:25 PM


Dream well my friend in the arms of your most blessed man....
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21 posted 2000-10-19 10:28 PM


Hand in hand they do go. Well said m'friend.
btw I got your email  
Answer when I can.
HUGz to ya!  

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