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Open Poetry #10

Bedroom of My Eyes

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2000-10-12 02:13 PM

Let me torture you
in the bedroom
of my eyes
Can you guess
what I am thinking?
as reflections
whisper words of art
Does the whirlpool
of baby blues
send sweet thoughts
to only you?
in the moonlight
from the bedroom
of my eyes
I look at you
and glance away
wondering what
it would be like
to make love
with you
Is your manhood
drowning in my lust?
as words of art
invite you into
the bedroom of
my eyes

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2000-10-12 03:10 PM

*wow* image of a torture in the bedroom of your eyes,.....superb....loved it.
full of promises for your lucky man

Charisma

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2000-10-12 03:27 PM

haa ..any lucky men out there?..thank you Charisma glad you enjoyed..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-10-12 03:36 PM

"In the moonlight from the bedroom of my eyes
I look at you and glance away wondering what it would be like to make love with you."
"Is your manhood drowning in my lust?"
Victoria you certainly know how to say the right words to get a mans attention...very nice words...softly romantic...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2000-10-12 03:47 PM

Well, youre too kind James..im glad you thought it romantic..thank you for peeking in today..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

5 posted 2000-10-12 04:09 PM

I look at you
and glance away
wondering what
it would be like

Victoria, sultry and alluring...with a spice of mystery.

Robert Joseph

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2000-10-12 05:00 PM

Thank you Robert..I am pleased you enjoyed my poem..free verse is harder for me to write but this one came quite naturally.

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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