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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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When and How If I could walk among the trees Taste the scent and feel the breeze. See the blue of back ground sky Watch the birds as they fly by. Just wander in this wonder land As naked as a jay to stand. Taking off the shrouding shroud Stand alone without the crowd. To press the grass beneath my feet Feel the sun its warmth and heat. To throw away the code of mean. Wash myself in freedoms clean To love in pure a natures bride Without thought and naught to hide. Caress the other side my soul. Only this would make me whole. As life goes by I sit the now Will it ever and when and how? |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ Hey naked nature boy!!  (sorry, couldn't help that) Naw,I really like this one.  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To throw away the code of mean. Wash myself in freedoms clean To love in pure a natures bride Without thought and naught to hide. Caress the other side my soul. Only this would make me whole. As life goes by I sit the now Will it ever and when and how? ==================== >"To throw away the code of mean."< now thats just about the coolest line... I mean when ya REALLY think about it... its very cool...SO very cool indeed... so is the premise and wisdom behind the whole poem So IS the poet who wrote it...  later-one-with-nature-gator me |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I really like this poem, all of it, but like Janet my favourite line has to be To throw away the code of mean That is an amazing concept, well done I like this, very well written Marsha |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Makes me think of the time i was hiking in hawaii and came across a naked man hiking towards me haa..he wore only a necklace and carried a knapsack in front of him haa.. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hey there cutie pie, This is how we should make it in miss Poet deVine's new town for poets ya! Boy what insparation we would all have hehe. You are the master, may your walk be a cool one. Loved this one Sy, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The how and when you do not lose But it is not for us to choose Or even ask the when or how Some day they will appear "right now" Very beautiful and meaningful poem Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--Enjoyed this poem very much! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Yes and thank you, naked nature boy. JM, Your all cool whip. Nature boy. *L* Sy Marsha, Thank you for the nice coment. Victoria, He was probably looking for the same place. LOL Cerenity, Love ya for loving it. Sy Elisabeth, Ya mean I can't look, just wait? Love Sy Martie, Thank you sweet Martie. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sy, beautiful sentiments - beautiful dream. One day I'm sure they will become reality. Dee |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautifully done. I loved this. I just couldn't let one of my favorite poets pass me by. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dee, Sweet comment, thank you. Temptress, Thank you for not letting it pass you by and the beautiful comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this one very much, Seymour! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thank you. *L* Sunshine, What ever. *L* |
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