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danny
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since 2000-05-09
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0 posted 2000-05-09 04:00 PM


                       LOSS


when once i gave i now retract
a soul now broken once intact
my spirit lit now has burned
for torment grows when love is spurned

i seek a face in seas of masks
yet visions new are blocked by past
looks are given smiles returned
and still my eyes are downward turned

a concious loss of self and worth
sustains decay in place of birth
where hope once ruled now reigns despair
the home of pride is now griefs lair

a shore upon i felt delight
becomes a desert harsh with spite
where hearts beauty filled my senses
now all is lost behind pains fences

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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
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1 posted 2000-05-09 04:15 PM


Hi Danny!
Nothing can destroy your soul. Love will cause pain accept it and you'll find that love is a wonderful feeling.

Sincerely
A_L

danny
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since 2000-05-09
Posts 18

2 posted 2000-05-09 04:25 PM


this is an old one guys but thanks for the kind words a-l

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