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redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 480
Franklin, TN
0 posted 2000-05-08 10:09 PM

Dark and warm, breezes flow over my skin
the wind caresses my hair
but it's your fingers I feel
the warmth of your touch on my heart

and I smile and look up towards the sky
and I smile and I realize


it's just the wind......
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2000-05-09 02:15 AM

ahh..Beautiful. The wind carries the caress of our loved ones sometimes. : )

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
2 posted 2000-05-09 02:55 AM

kindly put to the eyes of the night. the breeze is our brother reminding us of secrets long for got, carrying touch and messages that are true. i really loved the way your poem brought me to the feeling of the night and wind and a lovey friend.
truly,
redbraids
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