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lucky
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0 posted 2000-05-08 07:08 PM




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Martie
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1 posted 2000-05-08 08:24 PM


I cannot fatham the tears so many times when my once was enough to bury me...your hands together holding are so strong...your poetry always touches me.
Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-05-08 08:48 PM


I'm not sure quite how to verbalize my response to this, except to say that with each reading, I think I hurt more. How you write, my friend...how you write...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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3 posted 2000-05-08 10:08 PM


Oh, my kind and caring friend.
No one tells it quite like you do.
You've touched my Martie and Claire ...
and in having touched two who I hold so close to my heart ... simply, you have touched my heart.

I love your kindred spirit.
May God bless us all.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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4 posted 2000-05-09 02:40 AM


I especially am drawn to the line "they’d walk in cold eyes dark eluding iced over faces"
We will survive.
We will survive.
I love you.



 The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.


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