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rene
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0 posted 2000-04-27 08:39 PM


You the storm inside me
my rider.
You my warrior,
You were here yesterday
and nothing else was real.

In my heart i clothed you
In armour sweet as childrens prayers
And sent you out into the
to be my light, my warrior.


Dream my warrior,
Dream we sit by the fire,
and everthing is soft as childrens lullabyes
You my rider
my kind and gentle warrior
You the one the world cannot touch


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rene
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1 posted 2000-04-27 08:51 PM


rugadu van veehgibaun
Parker
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2 posted 2000-04-27 11:20 PM


This was interesting........... full of subtle passion.

hated the title though...... hard to click on.

Parker

rene
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3 posted 2000-04-28 08:14 PM


i do apologize, no title, about a star.
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