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rene
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since 2000-04-24
Posts 113


0 posted 2000-04-28 08:20 PM



(not my verse)

come down
your tea is on the table,
nothing seems to matter anymore
and if your good we'll go out on sunday,
spend the whole day thinkin' 'bout you
remember when life was lovely
foreer was captured in your smile
we were young and life was hopefull
we were laughing they couldn't stop us
no one in the world

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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2000-04-28 08:42 PM


thank god for paul... he sure did say a mouthful, huh?

nicely done. enjoyed.

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