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Peace Rose Haiku
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Peace Rose Haiku |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sun-colored, pink tinged < !signature-->peace rose silken on the vine sweet senses met fine Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-19-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sunshine, I wonder why no one has replied to this yet. This is a unique haiku, I really like your style. What a lovely way to describe a rose, you have added new life to it. Do share more haikus with us!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sunshine, I liked this very much, thanks for sharing it here with us. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine~  A Peace rose pretty Written by a Sunshine friend Smells so very sweet ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
one word,sunshine:WOW! Sunflower in Sunshine Yellow flower beams~ Yellow radiant bright rays~ Fills my heart with joy! just can't resist writing this ") |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melissa, with everyone's help, I'll be pleased to write more... Lost Dreamer - thank you for your kind comments... Marge, your beautiful rose touches my heart... Kaile, your Haiku was a pleasant way to put this back up on top...thank you! |
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