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midnightblues
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0 posted 2002-12-05 04:00 PM


I'll always remember
The first time we shared
A magical smile
Speechless and spellbound
It seemed so fragile


We were sitting side by side
In the first cabin
I don't quite remember
If others were looking
All I knew was WOW


That was 9 months ago
Look we've come so far
The ardour hasn't fade
You still set my heart aglow
And I love you for who you are


Maybe someday
We'll have to part
But I don't want to think
Nor will I start
Cos you still astound me
You make me grow up
And I'm still amazed
That you gave me your heart


I've always been praying
For the both of us
God made us strong
He'll help us go on
So I'll keep on trying
Till He wants us to part


Its that simple
I love you so much
This is for you
Straight from my heart

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I penned this specially for my boyfriend's birthday but I don't know if its ok enough. I want it to be something simple but yet can touch... how??

Lots of love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

© Copyright 2002 MiCheLLe - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-12-05 06:35 PM


MidnightBlues~
Michelle~  ... I think this is just perfect~
You've a way of expressing yourself that is most touching~
HE'LL LOVE IT~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Trillium
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2 posted 2002-12-06 01:39 PM


Michelle:  Anyone special to you, would appreciate and be touched by this lovely expression of your feelings!

Betty Lou Hebert

midnightblues
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3 posted 2002-12-06 02:19 PM


Aww Betty and Marge,

I really do appreciate your encouraging assurance. Thanks dears I you always gimme what I need.

Lots of Hugs and Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
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Windsor, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2002-12-06 06:01 PM


I think it's wonderful... the greatest gift you can give someone comes straight from your heart and I can see that this one certainly fits the above.  well written to.  Let's hope you find many more years together.  He sounds like a keeper as you do too.

Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
5 posted 2002-12-06 10:16 PM



midnightblues~
This is a beautiful and heartfelt write.
I'm sure your boyfriend is going to adore it.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Denise
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6 posted 2002-12-07 10:43 AM


One can't do better than something straight from the heart! This is lovely!
midnightblues
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7 posted 2002-12-07 11:15 AM


Dear Sherry, your kind comment really touched me. Thanks a million! much hugZ


Oh Vicky! Thanks for coming by! I'm so glad and thankful *_*

Denise dear, you are so sweet. I really appreciate your comments.

Thanks girls, anytime I need you!

Lots of Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

cherrylips
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8 posted 2002-12-08 10:23 AM


God I wish someone would write something this sweet for me! No wait! I wish I had someone to write something this sweet for! lol. I am sure he will love this, a great read, dx
Daniel J D
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9 posted 2002-12-09 12:28 PM


Very sweet and meaningful and straight from feelings within.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Joyce Johnson
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10 posted 2002-12-09 02:09 AM


Don't worry.  He will love your heartfelt sentiments.  joyce
midnightblues
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11 posted 2002-12-11 04:48 AM



Dearest cherrylips, love is all about choice. Maybe that someone is just by your side? *gRinZ*

Daniel, thank you for dropping by!

Aw Joyce, you're always so sweet and kind. many hugs!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

pegasus111
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12 posted 2002-12-12 02:54 PM




This is a lovely tribute to your hearts desire.. don't change a thing......

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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