Poets (this is dedicated to each of us please read)

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Open Poetry #8

Poets (this is dedicated to each of us please read)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-20 01:15 PM

Poets are people with
     Alot of
     Emotion
Searching the world
      Like
   a vast ocean
Casting spells with
     There
    Poems as
    Potions
  Writing from
       A
  Heart filled
     With
    Motion

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

1 posted 2000-06-20 02:48 PM

good job JJ, one tense problem I can see...there should be THEIR but other than that a great post. Nice rhymes too

~Heather

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2000-06-20 03:05 PM

Very cute!! Me like this one!!

Bridgette

"Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-06-20 05:42 PM

This thread is being locked as it is posted in 3 forums! Jeremiah, please reply to the email from LoveBug.. thanks..

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