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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-06-29 12:27 PM


~*~My Angel~*~

I know why your here,
God gave you to me.
Can you believe it all,
has happened so quickly?

You light up my life,
and you make me smile.
Its very hard to have fun,
if I dont see you for awhile.

All of the memories,
that we have yet to share.
As you talk of the future,
I know that you do care.

You took my heart,
and you also hid the key.
You tell me that you love me,
and we were meant to be.

You know that I love you,
with all that I say.
So always remember,
I'll love you more each and everyday.



© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-29 01:24 AM


love the poem. i can see you both love each other dear. so all my hopes, my dreams, and my wishes go out to you and him. hope to read my on your love for your man.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Jacman
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since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
2 posted 2000-06-29 11:24 AM


Falling in love is a beautifull thing.  I'm happy that you have and hope that its streingh never fades.


jason


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3 posted 2000-06-29 01:13 PM


This is a beautiful love poem, my friend. Keep up the good work!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Angel
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since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2000-06-30 12:07 PM


Great Poem! It was so sweet. It reminds me of my boyfriend so much. Good luck to you guys  !

~Susie


"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry W

Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
5 posted 2000-07-01 03:05 AM


I sincerely, with all my heart, hope that your venture in the love's deep abyss does not drown you.  Keep the faith and the trust and hope he does the same.

Jeremy D. Halstead

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
6 posted 2000-07-01 07:27 PM


Erin~ I'm so glad that you have found someone that you have such a good relationship with, you deserve it!!! Best of luck my dear and hopefully everything works out just great! Keep up the writing too! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Alwye
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In the space between moments
7 posted 2000-07-01 11:27 PM


Very beautiful and heartfelt work here!  

*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~

Caz
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since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
ConcepciĆ³n, Chile
8 posted 2000-10-10 10:48 PM


Hey, woow, I was just looking this old poems and I really realy liked this one, and I wasn't here when you posted it, so I guess I should reply now. Also I just thought that it deserved a *bump* so all the new guys, like me could take a look at it.
Bye, your friend,
                        Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
9 posted 2000-10-10 11:21 PM


aawww I love it!!! that was sooo sweet!!! Keep up the great work!! I look forward to reading more from you!!

Much love,
Priscilla


~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
10 posted 2000-10-10 11:43 PM


Thanks for the replies you guys...And thanks Caz for bumping it up!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

DancinQueen
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11 posted 2000-10-10 11:47 PM


ERIN~* Hey chickie! Long time no talk huh ?? This was soo good, im glad to hear that you've found someone that you can fully give your heart to. atleast one of us has found "him"   keep up the great work cause u know how i love your poems, talk to you later hopefully!!

Luv always** DQ


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
12 posted 2000-10-11 02:28 PM


Erin- this was such a sweet poem, well written, I like it
Erin
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~Chicago~
13 posted 2000-10-12 02:39 AM


Thanks for all the replies!!!You guys are the greatest!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
14 posted 2000-10-12 07:48 AM


theres nothing like being in love is there?  this poem is great as usual   i can't wait too see more
~*Pixie*~

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15 posted 2000-10-12 05:07 PM


nice poem. it does feel great to be in love




"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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