Loving Willy(new boyfriend)

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Monica Ash
Junior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 17

0 posted 2000-10-11 04:33 PM

   Whenever I look at your sweet
and gentle face,everything inside me
stops in its place.
   Your big blue eyes and your
cute smile make's me dream of us
together for a long,long while.
   We could be together and it
would be very romantic.
   I treasure that dream and hold it
close to my heart.
   I know for sure,Willy we will
never be apart.
   So now you know my dreams of
us two,so keep in mind that I truly
love you!!!!!!!
                ~*~Monica~*~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2000-10-11 06:21 PM

Aww very cute dedication to the one you hold true in your heart! Dont you just love feeling that way about someone? I think its the best feeling in the world. I liked this poem a lot...very sweet =o)

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

2 posted 2000-10-11 07:40 PM

aaaww thats so sweet!! Your lucky you have found some one you feel this way about!! I like you poem a lot!! keep writing!!

Luv,
Sweetstuff

PS~ thanx for the reply!!< !signature-->

~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~

[This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-11-2000).]

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

3 posted 2000-10-11 07:53 PM

Awwww...i hope yall last... if ya dont...ill kick his butt!!!

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

4 posted 2000-10-11 08:39 PM

Yeah, kick his butt if he breaks her hearth.
The poem was great, I loved the two last parts, they were really great, and I hope he is the one for you,
Your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-10-12 02:02 PM

Glad to see that you have found somebody. I hope it lasts and good luck!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2000-10-12 04:09 PM

"Whenever I look at your sweet
and gentle face,everything inside me
stops in its place."

What a great beginning for a poem! I love all of it, nice writing

And congrats on finding Willy!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

7 posted 2000-10-12 05:28 PM

First of all thank you very much for replying to my poem now I will return the favor.....great poem you write like your a true poet who's never had n e bad lines in one poem

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