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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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PEBBLES I threw pebbles of love against the window panes of your heart. But you wouldn’t come out and play. Hardrock 06/2900 |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Hardrock: Very nice. Been there, done that! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ouch, boy do I know that feeling.Few words, many feelings |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Hardrock,...you've done it now. hehe. This little piece here is so full, although it's so short. This is so sad, but at the same time, I love it. Take care. *Peace. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Next time throw them harder!!!  Cute! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
No, PdV....then that would be, "I busted out the window panes of your heart...now your old man is chasin' me down the street". Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i think we've all been here sometime and i doe's hurt but life goe's on. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wow! I *love* this! Sad an yet sublimely playful!  Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Hmmmm well Hardrock...... this one makes ya think. Its like the beginning to the story and the ending. No middle at all. This makes a nice read, cause i can imagine myself the middle. Nice work My Friend. Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Simplicity is beautiful!! And you proved it, I loved this, right to the heart I say...if someone threw pebbles at my window, Id have to go out and play (smile, smile) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
concise wonderful iamge really enjoyed the poem. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Next time throw a brick, and they'll get the message!! LOL This was lovely hon I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
excellent imagery here, rock. i love the ones with such a short powerful message. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
How simple! How innocent! I loved it! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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