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MyPenNameIsSam
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0 posted 2000-03-08 06:50 PM


Beautiful Butterfly     7/20/99
Dedicate To My Good Friend : T. G.

Oh beautiful butterfly
     Fly far far away
Let the wind carry your wings
     To a distant peaceful place
Feel the warmth of the sun
     Bring your colors to their peak
And the coolness of the water
     Give you peace of mind so sweet.

© Copyright 2000 molly - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 2000-03-08 06:57 PM


Your friend is very lucky to receive a gift such as this.  Thank you for sharing it with us as well.  
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-03-08 07:04 PM


"Butterflies are meant to be free"...
I let mine fly away for peace of heart and soul too..lovely dedication to your friend
take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


First__Knight
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3 posted 2000-03-08 07:10 PM


Left with smiles from your poem.....Soft and tender moments given to a friend  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.


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4 posted 2000-03-08 07:12 PM


Sam~
Float like a butterfly.
Write like a poet.
You'll be famous
before you know it !  

Your poem is lovely.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cerenity
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5 posted 2000-03-09 12:32 PM


Hi Sam,

This was beautiful, you have much tenderness in your soul, thankyou for sharing.

Cerenity

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