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randygene
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since 2000-01-28
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0 posted 2000-02-11 12:19 PM


I write these words down today
Because when I try to talk to you I forget what to say
When I'm with ou I feel like I'm in heaven
It's your smile, your beauty, kindness,
And the glow in your eyes when you look at me

When I'm with you I feel like I'm in hell
I love you but there is no one else I can tell
I know I can't have you, but then again
I realize that you will always be my friend
That puts us in heaven where angles belong
As long as I'm alive you will never have to be alone

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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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1 posted 2000-02-11 12:25 PM


Very sad ... but beautifully written

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!


Wizzard
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since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

2 posted 2000-02-11 12:28 PM


I cant say that I`ve ever had a friend that has made me feel like I was in Heaven and hell.
This sounds like what I went thru with a habit I once had.
Nicely done Randy.
Good luck

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

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