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Heaven or Hell

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randygene
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0 posted 02-11-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for randygene   Email randygene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for randygene

I write these words down today
Because when I try to talk to you I forget what to say
When I'm with ou I feel like I'm in heaven
It's your smile, your beauty, kindness,
And the glow in your eyes when you look at me

When I'm with you I feel like I'm in hell
I love you but there is no one else I can tell
I know I can't have you, but then again
I realize that you will always be my friend
That puts us in heaven where angles belong
As long as I'm alive you will never have to be alone
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Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 02-11-2000 12:25 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Very sad ... but beautifully written

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Wizzard
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2 posted 02-11-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

I cant say that I`ve ever had a friend that has made me feel like I was in Heaven and hell.
This sounds like what I went thru with a habit I once had.
Nicely done Randy.
Good luck

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