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Eloise
Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2000-02-11 12:12 PM


Age has stolen all of your grace
And left you with wrinkles on your face.
But your heart remains bigger than ever before.
And each day that passes I love you more.

Time is passing, you're becoming old.
With so many stories still untold.
Your dreams of youth are scattered in the wind.
Tell me more tales, enchant me once again.

Scatter the stones of yesterdays past.
Make the visions come alive, that's all I ask.
I want to laugh and cry with you.
And share your feelings so genuine and true.


© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 2000-02-11 12:21 PM


Love that endures time is the most beautiful love that exists  
Wizzard
Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

2 posted 2000-02-11 12:31 PM


Eloise,
this has really touched my heart.
It has brought back so many memories from the day`s that my grandparents were here.
I wish all couples had the strength and love to make that life long commitment last their whole lives like so many before this generation have.< !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.


[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-11-2000).]

Mike
Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

3 posted 2000-02-11 12:36 PM


Nicely done.  I enjoyed this wonderful poem.
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