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The hall more taken (a frost remix)
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The hall more taken (a frost remix) |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Two halls diverged in my own high school and viewing those who had traveled each I laughed at those who tried to be cool those who broke each and every rule the respect of their peers they did beseech. Than viewed the rest just as inane lost to the benefits of social bliss night after night they live in pain loneliness but all in vain so much of youth they do miss And seeing both as too extreme confused at which hall to take knowing both not what they seem I chose the glitter and the gleam then dismissed it as so very fake But I shall be saying this with a sigh for knowing how way leads to way to halls diverged in my school and I chose the one more traveled by and have regret it to this day |
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jenmarie Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 27 |
nice poem - interesting read - |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Great read...Enjoyed it much. We have 4 halls in my high school, Labeled freshman, sophmore, junior, and senior. And with me being such a fool, I travel the sophmore path. Until next year, when I advance to junior. And after that, senior, when I will rule! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL....as much as I enjoy Frost and this one in particular my favorite of his, I enjoyed your parody on it  ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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