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Tick Tock |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Tick Tock Where does play go when is the minute toys are us tick tock we play life instead of house tick tock we manipulate live people tick tock we cry real tears |
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donovan blue Junior Member
since 1999-09-21
Posts 26austin,tx,usa |
I like where you're headed with this one but I feel like there should be more development...like it's only half finished. You just grabbed my interest and there's no more to read! (keeping us begging for more, eh?) |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
I have to agree with Donovan Blue It need more to it. |
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