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In the garden of Muse
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In the garden of Muse |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Dressed up in ten thousand hues The sky was reflecting the ground Somewhere in the garden of Muse Golden leaves were hiding a noun Collecting the nectar of valuable thoughts Poets and writers resembled the bees Filled with the themes, ideas and words Ripened verses hung off the trees Blowing around the worn out cliches Autumn’s breeze swept through the garden Breathing the mist straight into my face The evening seemed lively and ardent Lurking around the face of the clock Hands of time crept on their toes And leaving the garden I felt on my back Stares of praise and bewildered applause ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
Sounds too much like Alice In Wonderland, or some kids channel. That's the down fall of it. |
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