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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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0 posted 2011-03-08 04:51 PM



Past your peel
into
my mouth
of assumption,
I savor you,
during the high tide
of day
with splinters
of wind,
the footsteps of leaves
crackling,
as unzipped pants and
blouses
torn
detached by pickets
drawing a line
kick at the sky
washed of their
covetnous
in this place,
their place.

Their place
in the sin.

Don’t dry the
seaspray
from my smile
let the blush
of dusk
lick it
away
as your soft cries
slice
through
the hail
of emptiness
and the searing
glare
of lone
and blind
dreams.

The air, will
continue to tremble
each night
we
are apart
the music
will mope
each moment
my mouth misses
the darkness
of you
the shrouded gorges
and lagoons
that lay
restlessly
in wait
to be discovered
and unearthed
unlocking the
beauty
of their
wilderness
exploring the
lushness
of their
bounty
until the
flagstaff
is surmounted
in the fertile
of your vale
making it
weep
and weep,
for the clinching
of its
settlement.

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Nareena
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since 2011-02-17
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BC, Canada
1 posted 2011-03-08 11:31 PM


Yet another one I'm not letting my husband read Very enjoyable, thanks Richy!
Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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2 posted 2011-03-09 12:31 PM



Thanks Nareena! lol


EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
3 posted 2011-03-09 09:41 AM


Very lush from the stir of suggestion, through the buildup midway, cascading into the river of desire's deep well.
O it's getting warm in here..........

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

4 posted 2011-03-09 12:59 PM



Emma, Emma, I am so glad you're here among us you are such a delight you are. Leave momentarily if the currents change but always come back. Many of these fine folks have been here for 5, 8, 10 years plus. Become a permanent part of this special group so that we can all grow younger together.



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