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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Another lame attempt Constructing poetry Remember I'm just a Toerag Only rhyme occassionally So I've tried Acrostic To see how I might do It sucks like most my others Couldn't wait till I was through |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
I have felt like this so many times so your not the only one  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Toerag - hey Toe, long time no see. Not a bad write for a Toerag... BC |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
oh! Acrostic, I thought you said atrocious.   |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Reminds me of one I wrote once... Uncontrollable...that's me so simple that I am complex to those who can't understand simplicity. Yet, I wear the sheerness like an acrostic: Sprinkling my life with new tastes Having a touch of you with every meal Engaging my smiles to wrap around what could be Ever challenging that part of me Romantically reserved Needing the honesty, a gift of insurance allowing the Emerging me, to live my dreams to Stretch my measurings of a Simple life into a recipe for two. (just remembering ...) M |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
... but dang you suck at it so good 'n all. A |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
I like this. i can relate. reminds me of a poem i wrote a while back... when I write a poem nothing happens. Earth does not shake, walls do not come down, people still breathe the same air they would if never pushed this ink around. I just used an approximate rhyme and now I'm breaking line structure for no reason at all because what does this matter? I shoot blanks at targets, and so do you. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I loved it..sorry..it sucked...no really I loved it! (ok it sucked a little)...NO really it was great..and I loved it.. LOL Nice to read you Toe! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Hey that was really neat! Rae |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Well, I don't know that anything you do, really sucks. |
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