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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2008-07-28 11:08 AM



They build you to be unique
And some are all the same
They make people to please
I thought everyone was different
When I finally looked I was wrong
People said I wasn’t like the rest
All I know is they found out that I’m nothing special
Do you think I still am?
Am I still the person to say when it’s over?
I have tried to make you smile
But you seem to think it doesn’t affect you
Tonight was the night I said I was done
Please let me go out
Before I come undone
Has it all gone wrong?
Autumn has my reason
I hope she didn’t lose it
She is my new hope
Cause I still haven’t given you my name…
no body knows love
they all can say they do
nobody knows that it can change



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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-28 01:05 PM


We are indeed unique by ourselves, but what we seek is to be unique for someone ... yes, it does happen.

This is nicely done.

Trust your uniqueness ...

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-07-28 06:42 PM


WELCOME TO PIP!



ARCTIC WIND

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