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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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I could eat your soul, licking my lips, forever tasting sweetness, In one bite, devoured, your mind satisfies hunger, your words, my thirst quenched, But, what is to be left for dessert? [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-28-2008 10:37 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
After swallowing the soul what else is needed, dear ARH? You describe desire very powerfully. Anyway, maybe a satisfying dessert would be LOVE ... Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear A Romantic Heart, Yes, what, indeed? This is a sweet and lovely poem. Bobby |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi ARH, you’ve got a good appetite. Prasad  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This must be such a BIG desire for something, or someone! LOL ARCTIC WIND |
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