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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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0 posted 2007-10-16 02:48 AM


You might leave your home one day and never return
Or you might just up and die because it's your turn.

You might die from a disease you never heard of
(Or from one of the many you have heard of).

You might drown in a flood or die by fire
Under circumstances unexpected and dire.

You might be blown to hell by terrorists
Or talked to death by a crazy therapist.

You might be poisoned by your food or drink,
The end could be closer than you think.

Earthquake, tornado, murder or accident.
Your chances of enjoying retirement, not worth a cent.

And in the end.....There's the prospect of hell!


© Copyright 2007 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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Great White North
1 posted 2007-10-16 03:13 AM


Good one Ida, only thing is for me I'm already there...'cause I believe there's only two places to be, Heaven or hell and I ain't in Heaven yet...ha, ha!
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2007-10-16 03:21 AM


Thank You, Moon,
I like to think we've been sold a "bill of goods" and things can only get better.
                                 Ida

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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Great White North
3 posted 2007-10-16 03:27 AM


Yes how true, there's only two possible emotions, love or fear, and whatever isn't love is fear.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-10-16 05:54 AM


Yes all of these things might happen...we are not promised a certain number of years...some get more and some get less...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-10-16 05:57 AM


nicely expressed ... I agree with James..some get more, some get less... bottom line is I guess we need to cherish the moments we have right now.   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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Australia, Victoria
6 posted 2007-10-16 11:03 PM



Ida, that just doesn't sound like you being negative, think of all the wonderful things that can happen to you and I certainly hope they do. Have a happy day and take care.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-10-16 11:26 PM


Hmmm, Ida ya got me ta ponderin'! Are you being cynical ~ or realistic?

Methinks that you might have had a less than joyful day ~ and that can be a living hell!

~ and then again, "You might" experience heaven on Earth when you least expect it!

Loving hug,

Linda
P.S. I think all poets should go to heaven! lol

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2007-10-17 03:20 AM


I think almost everyone missed the point entirely on this one. It was actually supposed to be funny (I have a sarcastic sense of humor sometimes.) The gist of it is. With all we have to worry about from day to day then we have to worry about going to hell on top of it. I think Moondogz got it.
                             Ida

                            

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