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Warrior Bristo
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since 2007-07-28
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0 posted 2007-10-14 02:01 PM



Nothing To Fear But Angels


Hush child
Your safe
Calm your soul
Hush your heart
Quiet your mind
Everything's alright
Listen,
Be still
Don't be afraid
There's no evil here
Your protected here
There's nothing to fear
But angels


This poem like "Phantom" has been published. This poem is about something my Dad told me one night before i went to bed because i was afraid to turn off the light.

warrior undefeated
  

© Copyright 2007 Brenna Nicole Bohn - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-10-15 06:10 PM


Nice writing...You need not fear the angel Gabriel nor Michael but Satan is another story...Revelations 12:7-12...James
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-10-16 08:30 PM


a most interesting 'write'!

serious applause!!

p.s.: fine poet photo. as well!

The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
Missouri
3 posted 2007-10-16 09:45 PM


it has a calming effect i needed it thank you so much read my poem Lost Cousin and you will understand
Kalle
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since 2007-10-15
Posts 89
Finland
4 posted 2007-10-17 06:20 AM


Are the angels to be feared those of Analyse and Intellect?
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2007-10-17 07:01 AM


Brenna, just a  small correction

"your safe"  should be you're safe
and "your protected" should be
you're protected



It definitely is calming~~
M

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