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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2007-02-09 09:57 AM



whispering softly
you have sheathed my love within
our souls intertwined
~*~
rain sings on window
sweet slow lullaby of love
matching gentle pace
~*~
synchronous breathing
senses rushing to flood stage
unstoppable surge
~*~
this new memory
sharing for eternity
each time our eyes meet

Inspired by: /pip/Forum103/HTML/000229.html

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2007 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-02-09 10:14 AM


beautifully done, and yes, she is such an inspiration....
passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-02-09 11:14 AM


very romantic!
Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2007-02-09 01:49 PM


just breathe......

~~~kingsangel~~~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2007-02-09 02:04 PM



B E A U T I F U L !

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

The Lady
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5 posted 2007-02-10 01:45 AM



Doctor Love
how beautifully
you have woven your words
into my memories

magnificent!

romantic too...

SEA
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with you
6 posted 2007-02-12 02:44 PM


yes... *sigh*

and the rain, oh yes, gotta love that....
beautiful!

Martie
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7 posted 2007-02-12 04:31 PM


Interloper...A lovely sharing!
Marsha
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8 posted 2007-02-13 11:31 AM


Interloper darling man,  you slip softly into the corners of my mind and soul stirring sweet memories of delicious thoughts.

I have just spent the last four days on campus darling man, and while there I cannot access my mail or get online using my laptop. I have tried but my laptop doesn’t use the chipset that the wireless network is set to. Therefore I have to struggle along using the old method of reading books and studying in the library. A beautiful library it is too, but it doesn’t allow access to PiP’s. Mainly because my computer account with the Uni is one of the associate ones and therefore limited. So I can only get on line to read these pages of pleasure when I am at home.

Beautiful writing as always, you know you have such a superb lightness of touch when it comes to writing, this is worth coming home for

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

miscellanea
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OH
9 posted 2007-02-13 07:42 PM


Interloper,

   After reading the words of your inspiration, I can easily see why you were inspired to write.  Her words really touched me, as well.  

   Marvelous writing and a lovely response to a wonderful poet.  

miscellanea

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2007-02-13 08:53 PM


Enchanting response, to this very beautiful rendering.

Ah...you both are amazing hearts.
TD

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