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Open Poetry #39

Forsaken Lands

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

0 posted 2006-09-28 09:28 PM

A different blood
Etched in the sunset
The sound of forgotten peace
Heard through the streets
Of painted pleasure
And sacred truth.
A strange new feeling
I’d never felt before
Break out of old skin
It’s gotten too thick
Your heart's calloused over
It’s time to let it all in
Embrace the beauty
Of a different land
When cities of old
Remind me of
The struggle I felt
So lost, and so cold
So let it all go
Melt into your hands,
The promise, the future in forsaken lands.

~gypsyheartx 9/28/06

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-09-28 09:59 PM

"So let it all go
Melt into your hands,
The promise, the future in forsaken lands."

Very nicely penned Miranda.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2006-09-30 12:48 PM

Break out of old skin
It’s gotten too thick
Your heart's calloused over
It’s time to let it all in
Embrace the beauty

That part hooked me and you held me tight. Thank you for sharing.

aziza

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

3 posted 2006-09-30 11:55 PM

Thank you very much for your kind thoughts Enchantress and Aziza.

Hugs~Miranda

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