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0 posted 2006-09-30 10:06 PM



Only a moment,  a mere grain compared
To the mountainous spire that stands
In advance of hunger’s ache in mist
laden dreams.

Eternities lie unmoved,  awaiting dawn’s
rise as Moonbeams paint the evening skies and
Crickets scratch a vigilant tune in
harmonious accord

Waiting,  stoic,  still and hushed, with
An inclination toward the succulent
Savored taste of  pristine and delicate
lips, a devilish apparition  awakens
a slumbering rogue in wait of a midnight
soiree.

And as the night glows softly,  a scent
Shall waft and weave,  bring to mind
A moment,  only a moment when a
Mere grain compared meekly to a
Mountainous spire and hunger’s ache
Stood stoic and still in wait of
mist laden dreams.


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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-09-30 10:10 PM


"And as the night glows softly,  a scent
Shall waft and weave,  bring to mind
A moment,  only a moment when a
Mere grain compared meekly to a
Mountainous spire and hunger’s ache
Stood stoic and still in wait of
mist laden dreams."

Oh wow Barry....you are on a roll lately!
This is lovely, and may the scent be WS?

Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2006-09-30 10:30 PM


Nice writing...James
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2006-09-30 11:17 PM


Beautiful images here.
TD

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