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0 posted 2006-06-05 06:56 AM



Uncle Harold’s Truck


when I was nine, Uncle Harold had a truck
I didn’t realize how old it was back then
it was dull green rust country ford type
the back was for riding with dust and cotton flying
under us was splintered plank replacing metal
the back window was out or gone don’t know which
and our legs pointed away from fish hooked poles
but we used the tackle boxes and wheel humps
as chairs fit for royals to see over the tailgate
the front was just as friendly as the back as
Patsy Cline sang, “I Go Out Walking After Midnight”
and everybody knew the words so loud and sweet
“The Old Rugged Cross” too was always a favorite
the moving clouds were the only art galley we ever saw
time melted away there as sandwiches passed the window
and thick sweaty cokes bottled floating peanuts dripped
multiplication tables were learned there, still I can’t remember them
I was too busy looking down the road and waving at strangers
and kudzu and Christmas lights spread high in hanging July
as we giggled and pointed at tire and toilet flower planters
oh, I wish I were back in that truck listening to the tires spin
but no matter where I go or what I do I will always be
that dusty Mississippi girl in the back of Uncle Harold’s truck

just some words cut from
the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2006 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-06-05 06:59 AM


sounds fun! can I hitch a ride?
Debo
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2 posted 2006-06-05 08:35 AM


This sure takes me back and it was my uncle Goober,Yes I had an uncle Goober
Thanks for taking me back to when life was easy

Debo

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