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Open Poetry #38

Don't wake me...

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2006-06-04 12:39 PM

DON’T WAKE ME

Before the sun is warm again
trees green
and flowers show their colours
when birds sing
and children play
only then
wake me up
but let me sleep
through my
self inflicted
winter
don’t wake me
please don’t!!!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-06-04 03:35 PM

"self inflicted
winter"

Potent work Neeraja.
I enjoyed it.

Liz Sinclair
Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

2 posted 2006-06-04 11:15 PM

I liked your metaphors, very clever. Thanks for sharing. Liz...Carpe Diem

When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad, I'm better.
Those who are easily shocked should be shocked more often.
...the immortal Mae West

linkin16
Junior Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 26
Wales,UK

3 posted 2006-06-04 11:20 PM

i cant remember what the sun looks like..but i will burn again..good stuff

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-06-05 07:01 AM

I understand this deeply

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