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Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2006-01-31 01:33 AM

  Narrow Of Moon
  ~*Marge Tindal*~

              You tumbled
                    from the narrow of moon
                     waxing alabaster dreams
                     quarter-mooning
                    as you orbit my earth
                   fixating your coming phase
                on shadows of this heart
           half-full of expectations

                                  when without warning
                              you wane from my need
                             for the full of you
                             I embark upon
                             the plunge of dark
                              awaiting the new moon pass
                                to once more phase into
                                  your narrow
                                     that sets me aglow

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

1 posted 2006-01-31 03:28 AM

awesome marge

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2006-01-31 07:41 AM

My dear poetess, you need neither man nor moon to make you glow!

Hugs with love,
EO

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-01-31 08:49 AM

Excellent dear Marge...
So very creative you are!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

4 posted 2006-01-31 02:08 PM

Tis is great Marge

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

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Tolerance for a short time

5 posted 2006-01-31 02:12 PM

Excellent words but I would love to read the underlying rough

Dave

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

6 posted 2006-01-31 02:15 PM

Enchanting!

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2006-01-31 04:49 PM

Dear Marge: You must have been a Moon Goddess in another life...........or perhaps you still are?

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

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Washington State

8 posted 2006-01-31 05:16 PM

I love this "moon rapture". Joyce

amepoesie
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since 2006-01-19

Posts 63
Canada

9 posted 2006-01-31 06:33 PM

That's a nice piece!
Good job!

In any case, any new challenge to offer me? I bought poetry books the other day. Wouldn't mind getting challenged a little bit!

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2006-01-31 08:45 PM

Wow! This is just fantastic, Marge.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2006-02-01 10:19 AM

Friends~
I appreciate your replies SO MUCH on this little moon-thought~

So easily this one DID TUMBLE from that slivered crescent that spoke to me~
It penned easily and as you can well-imagine, knowing me as you all do, I just had to make the time to create the format code to allow it to curtsey the way I wanted it to~

Knowing. by your replies, that it is well-received shows me that it was worth the effort !

It's a great day to be a poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

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Maidstone Kent England

12 posted 2006-02-01 02:35 PM

Margie Girl darling one, just giving you a wave, and saying this is a delight. Very pretty, and so evocative. You know I'm not up to writing the long treatise I used to do, but I simply couldn't go past this without saying its lovely

love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
xxxxxxxx
Gray is looking after me, and making sure I don't over do things, honestly!

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2006-02-01 02:37 PM

MarsaLove~
My day is happier just having you in it !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

jody5
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since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

14 posted 2006-02-01 06:09 PM

Marge did that moon inspire you? You are such a good poet poetry just seems to flow out of you in such a grand manner. I loved this. Hugs Kimberly

iliana
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USA

15 posted 2006-02-02 03:41 AM

Much enjoyed this Marge!

tracie66
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Australia

16 posted 2006-02-02 07:12 AM

Oh yes indeedy - Margie the moon goddess, certainly fits you well sweetie...such a delight to read as always my friend.

~hugs~ floating to the moon and back just to reach you Margie girl

Love Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

17 posted 2006-02-02 07:16 AM

He was indeed a thin,
silvery crescent a couple
of nights ago...

so glad I tumbled
across your Narrow...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

18 posted 2006-02-03 09:46 AM

You ALL make me so happy to be a poetess~
Thank you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

MGROVES

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california

19 posted 2006-02-04 05:06 AM

back to the top

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02

Posts 94
england,

20 posted 2006-02-04 05:18 PM

really enjoyed this poem!
such a wonderful write

leanne x

rosepetals25

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PA

21 posted 2006-02-04 07:39 PM

I liked this a lot. I've always been a child of the moon

Tara

jane_kiedis
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since 2006-02-04

Posts 38
Philippines

22 posted 2006-02-04 07:39 PM

aww... Marge, ur work is amazing!
kinda felt the spirit in there...hehe!

cheers! c",)

------> Jane

psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

23 posted 2006-02-04 07:44 PM

just smiling at your moon words

M

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

24 posted 2006-02-06 09:41 AM

MyFriends~
The moon phases me ... poetically ...
knowing that it also word-shines on you is my absolute delight~

I feel blessed with the aura of your friendships ... one and all~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

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