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steavenr
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0 posted 2006-02-04 12:57 PM



from the time when the first day
of birth-dirt burst on opulence' scene
and the moral fiber of that earth-clad
corporeal being felt complete
when the joinery of celestial providence
melded leather with vermeil
and twain walked together
in a maelstrom so surreal

so fell the apple, so fell they all
from their malus pumila
as pseudo-divines swept
in the rancored wrath of hagia sophia
ever excluded, ever in search
of that which time has wrapped
in doubted silence of its existence
for which is found its path

to God�again.

[This message has been edited by steavenr (02-06-2006 03:30 AM).]

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-02-04 11:03 AM


Raw beauty found here...

..."ever excluded, ever in search
of that which time has wrapped
in doubted silence of its existence
for which is found its path

to God…again."

Inspiring read Steavenr.

TD


poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02
Posts 94
england,
2 posted 2006-02-04 11:27 AM


wow!!
really enjoyed this poem. really powerful, alot of emotion. really like it, keep up the good work leanne x

jane_kiedis
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since 2006-02-04
Posts 38
Philippines
3 posted 2006-02-04 02:12 PM


what else can i say?

its brilliant!!!

cheers!

psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2006-02-04 04:55 PM


thank you, TD, poetry queen, and jane for reading.  thank you for your kind comments..."TD, poetry queen, and jane"...doesn't that remind you of an old 60's song...oh well....
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-02-05 12:57 PM




Oh! Amazing work.

Bagger Vance
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since 2006-02-01
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Aotearoa
6 posted 2006-02-05 10:32 AM


loved your diction friend poet

White Gold Wielder

steavenr
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Posts 4058

7 posted 2006-02-06 03:29 AM


thank you Lady and Bagger Vance (always wondered if you were real...now, I know!)  
thanks for reading and commenting

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