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Edward Grim
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0 posted 2006-02-04 12:16 PM


Billy Shakes

Oh yeah,
Sure sure.
My buddy
Billy Shakes,
We go back to the stone age.
He was a hoity-toity guy
I’ll tell you that much.
He always dated a tempest.
But he had to tame the shrew
He was funny,
But his comedy had errors.
Billy had a couple pets,
A phoenix and a turtle,
They died,
But all’s well that ends well.
Like me,
(But not really)
He had a love for writing.
But the weird thing
About his written word
Is that he killed off all his characters.
Not a big dealing
But it was always suicide.
Nothing much.
Just
Much ado about nothing…




Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it".

[This message has been edited by Edward Grim (02-06-2006 10:50 AM).]

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1 posted 2006-02-04 01:31 AM


I always let mine die from malnutrition....yeah, that says a lot too, doesn't it?

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RedStoneEB
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2 posted 2006-02-04 05:47 AM


Reminds me of some sort of diet drink
Edward Grim
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3 posted 2006-02-04 11:44 AM


Yeah I know what you mean ratleader, in my films I always kill off the main character just to spite hollywood cinema. Like swallowing a pebble in their tea or something ridiculous like that, lol.

Redstone, yeah it does sound like a protein drink, ha. It's actually about William (Billy) Shakespeare (Shakes). You know, much ado about nothing, lol.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-02-05 12:59 PM




I really like your voice Edward.



jane_kiedis
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5 posted 2006-02-05 05:38 AM


cool poem ala trivia u got there huh c",)

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OwlSA
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6 posted 2006-02-05 05:45 AM


Giggles, Ed - and I needed them.  Thank you.

- Owl

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7 posted 2006-02-06 09:19 AM


Edward~
You set my face to *grinning* with this one~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


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Edward Grim
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8 posted 2006-02-06 10:12 AM


Thanks Marge, I'm glad I made you smile, mission accomplished, lol.  - Ed
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