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Impetuous Night
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Impetuous Night |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Deep turquoise brocades in pale fingers The pleat of a January fault, pinned together In the wariness of falling stars and icicle dust A new moon flaunts bare bosom to the earth Her hair astray in the chilly lather Making wishes that vaporize in thick clouds Falling gently in snowflake tears, evening clears Folding sheets of gold along the dark creep of midnight Turning shadows to mannequin dreams Such poise in the offing of a silver sleep To turn and tangle in a vanquished lie Rising Celsius in covet tenderly so frail and shy Yet just another stall of fate, such the light To radiate of suns, worn along the rub of sigh And all this time, to realize that morn has come Copyright Kkh 1/18/06 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God there are so many perfect lines here, I wish I had written them. A new moon flaunts bare bosom to the earth Turning shadows to mannequin dreams Yet just another stall of fate, such the light To radiate of suns, worn along the rub of sigh You should be very proud of this, its amazing. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is beautiful, really beautiful...what a wonder to read and enjoy...thank you so much for the pleasure... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Every line is perfect!  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece of writing, a pleasure to read  Julie |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 magical! am keeping this one, Kathleen |
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