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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Truth tried it on wasn't me though, seeing through to the real, not nearly shapely enough to reveal temptation so after stretching my imagination, the fit blueing my mood, I let it fall to the feet, where it clung, probably wanting to remain a part of me but... feeling drunk with sadness kicked it across the room leaving a pile of another "what if" to walk over M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, You don't mess around. You just go for the core. But I'd like to disrespectfully disagree with the first verse, okay?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, The world is full of what if's  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
but... feeling drunk with sadness kicked it across the room leaving a pile of another "what if" to walk over outstanding write!!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
shaking my head I love this. an analogy that can be applied to every facet of ourselves that we stubbornly refuse to actualize. The only role I think that wouldn't suit you though, is that of an inauthentic. You are one of those rare beauties, mo. You look good in damned near anything, and I suspect, you look good in nothing at all too.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
if you only knew ~sighing~ Karen, you do make me smile M |
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