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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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bottle caps pretending to be crowns for a sky that looks down bald headed moon laughing now at the immaturity of street lights in their gauzy shawls sipping fog joe's slowly I hear the panting hounds of my own dog tired hurry leathering the granite shoeshine gumless I am proud of my soles binky bay has gypsies in her belly bobbing their bows on gray and a splinter or two of the gulls fresh creamery taggers with feathered quills and I wonder of the boards there on the wharf of gavi's receptacle who made them ashen on purpose and pushed their green trees under the frothing stew of an occasional white tie side's juxtaposition ________________ daark scribblenote: longship (nordic breath) at dock side..santa barbara-ish [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-02-2006 11:35 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You make me want to see it!! (do you have a digital?). Please.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Did you wave at the gypsies for me?  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wish i was there to see  My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
suzziec..thanks for the eyes lady..yes I do have a digital, but it is out of film at the moment..(grin) _____________________ ms sunshine, thanks lady friend for the warm glance ______________________ ms groves, thank you for your moments |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I think I CAN see it! Love the line about the gull's fresh creamery ~ you have the most awesome way of describing things! Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Caroline, you warm me with your icy touch, humble thanks |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Harbor lights, gulls, water lapping at the docks and gypsies moored for the night...I can almost feel the seabreeze kissing my face, hear the distant clang of buoy bells and the rush of surf calling me to winter beaches. ~ Klassy ~ |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Nice one Dark "bald headed moon laughing now at the immaturity of street lights in their gauzy shawls" That's great. The whole thing is great. Cheers - Ed “True absurdism is not less but more real than reality” |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl...sand dunes? and time to move it from one side of the mind to the other thanks lady ________________ Edward G, thanks my friend, you make it a pleasure to post em. ________________ ms vandan, thanks so much for your review |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks again van |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"binky bay has gypsies in her belly bobbing their bows on gray" Sigh... makes me want to be santa barbara-ish... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I think I've been there!!  |
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