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Upon the Art of Tipping Cow
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Upon the Art of Tipping Cow |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Less than me it's less than me a hotspot in Atlantic sea persuasive of the things that we find gathering so grand whip a wind around my face take an edge of me and trace possibilities and maps and three degrees is more than apt of what this needs to be to be free of questions that are asked does it matter? that's their ass too bad they didn't vote for me 'cause now I am allowed last laugh" as I sit here on my ranch I have wisdom no one knows cattle--standing in repose as the nights are days I know the art of moonless skies as I watch them, toppling the lies while I was asleep... but those are farmers I don't understand someone chop a line I am missing chromosome and "Y" is a chalice to be filled and I know, I know, there's still answers that you seek and pills paid their bills of Merck and ills are created by the bliss of what they usedta do it is murder anyway... I wish-- I was never president or chosen to be "it" this is much too much for just one man so I'm allowed the precedent of doing what I think I must because my job is based on trust and a second of delay-- cows, they hit the ground that way-- sleeping in the field. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Good morning, great one. Another masterpiece. best to you and pleasant dreams if indeed they come. martyjo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
OMG....I love you, K-Lady! Brilliant!  ....jo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
you always leave me speechless, you know that? deep breath in... sighhh  me xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I got in trouble for tipping a waitress to much once... but I enjoyed your poem and your layers |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Feeling this one... Hugs, you... |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
loved this! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Less than me it's less than me a hotspot in Atlantic sea persuasive of the things that we find gathering so grand whip a wind around my face take an edge of me and trace possibilities and maps and three degrees is more than apt of what this needs to be to be free of questions that are asked does it matter? that's their ass too bad they didn't vote for me 'cause now I am allowed last laugh" as I sit here on my ranch I have wisdom no one knows cattle--standing in repose as the nights are days I know the art of moonless skies as I watch them, toppling the lies while I was asleep... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I read this late last nite when I got home from "lil sis" and all I could do was smile at your poetic genius and wit.... your rhyme speak rocks lovie.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity It is very hard to pass JM but you rock for me too. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
'cause now I am allowed last laugh" as I sit here on my ranch I have wisdom no one knows Ahhh, but we shall see won't we? Good write lady. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just checking in to wave at you all, and yep, the party is over, and we have new news to get us worked up enough to continue clean up. I wish I had more to say, than "thank you" and it's just so surreal here at times. Hard to believe at times--there are still 15 to 1600 people missing, and the hope is that they will find three hundred bodies in the debris and the rest are merely paperwork snafus regarding tracking/tracing refugees. That is a very strange thing to type. Shaking my head. That's what I mean--surreal--and heartbreaking. In the midst of all this, some days it's hard to feel blessed. But I yam.  thanks for reading and I love you all, and yep, I'm hanging in there. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I haven't had my daytime nap yet after getting home from my allnighter shift, but still had to pop in an read ya. Hehe, I enjoyed this BBQ. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a fine tale of pathetic lack of caring by those whose job it is to care. Bless you for keeping the story alive. We all know IWIWT, but for this one I've ISGIRT! (I'm so glad I read this!) Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karen, I always gobble up your words quickly on my first read through of your poems. Then, on the second time around, I chew your words slowly to savour and digest each mot thoroughly! Big hugs to you, Linda |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well, m'lady, I'll just say I like your poem and I think it's witty and oh so true....and leave it at that. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (03-05-2006 12:57 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You got under his skin with your wit and your whip...with a good one!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Splendid work!! |
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