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Ethan M. O'Callahan New Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 7 |
you and i are looking out a different window looking at a different sky but we can see the same clouds moving indistinctly forming pictures to our eyes It's hard to believe that though we look out different windows we see the same sky you and I As we dance to the beat of different drummers the same stars sparkle in our eyes and alone we walk along through the same summers keeping our lonliness disguised maybe soon we'll see the window doesnt matter and love's face has no need to hide but until then you'll see me at your window waiting will I see you outside mine? expressions tell the deepest and darkest of secrets with emotions we can't hide but I can't read the looks you do and do not give me i wonder if you can read mine in the end we've wasted one year wishing, waiting and still we're barely only friends |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my ... don't waste another moment.. love waits for no one. Enjoyed your thoughts this evening & Welcome to Passions! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"maybe soon we'll see the window doesnt matter and love's face has no need to hide" I certainly hope so. Longing, lovely poem. Welcome Ethan! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
"you and i are looking out a different window looking at a different sky" I enjoyed the poem, especially this beautiful line! Neeraja |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
maybe soon we'll see the window doesnt matter and love's face has no need to hide but until then you'll see me at your window waiting will I see you outside mine? sounds to me, like both might be afraid to reveal their true feelings for fear of ruining the relationship they now have? this was a throught provoker |
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