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Klassy Lassy
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0 posted 2006-02-23 04:33 AM


Words march across pixels
building a median,
painting the center line of your face
a million colors, incognito.

Hand-to-hand, in the eye of the matrix,
we rap to keys and code,
sing of marshmallows and mayhem,
dance to the rush of an emerald river.

Envy divines the depths,
tracing my face in the current.
On the surface, dragon scales
ripple and shimmer in the light, quiet.

A sword of fire throws a golden beam,
bronzing the quest of a man unseen.
In the echo of sunlight and asphalt,
I remain a mystery...

M'Lord paints my heart green.


                Klassy Lassy

(For Zach)
11/02/04

© Copyright 2006 Klassy Lassy - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2006-02-23 06:54 AM


a romantic jousting of images
castle pen swallowed

enjoyable ms

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-02-23 07:17 AM


this took me to a great place...such fabulous images stretching out into a marvelous place to be.  

Well done!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-02-23 08:52 AM


"A sword of fire throws a golden beam,
bronzing the quest of a man unseen.
In the echo of sunlight and asphalt,
I remain a mystery...

M'Lord paints my heart green."

W O N D E R F U L !!

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Klassy Lassy
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4 posted 2006-02-23 04:39 PM


Daark,  even has a moat of emerald rivers!
thank you. ~ K ~

Klassy Lassy
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5 posted 2006-02-23 04:41 PM


Lee, I've seen your poetry...your imagination is limitless. Thank you for taking a peek!   ~ K ~
Klassy Lassy
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6 posted 2006-02-23 04:47 PM


Enchantress, as always, you make me smile.  This poem was the result of a conversation with lordmadrox, a very talented young dragon slayer whom I have never met, who did indeed spark my poetic imagination.  While he was talking with me, his new puppy dumped a bucket of green paint!  

LOL  Thank you for reading.  hugs

~ Karen ~

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-02-24 12:11 PM




Oh yes Karen... this is beautifully done.


OwlSA
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8 posted 2006-02-24 12:12 PM


Talent is what you have!

- Owl

Klassy Lassy
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9 posted 2006-02-24 07:41 PM


Thank you, Owl.  It was a fun write.  

Klassy

Klassy Lassy
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10 posted 2006-02-26 11:34 PM


Lady, always nice to have you stop to read!
Thank you.

~ Karen ~

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