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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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my mind bends the abandon by the dragon's sleep of bandon where face rock looks for a daughter's god and the footprints in sand of man are saliva soothed salty smooth for some dawn skin's eyes to follow hollow like old joe’s java bowl and viking wine from gretel’s kettle the stumble dance of these new boots with cross eyed foot correction twenty-twenty is still fortyish except on mornings like today when another dime of time is a new coat of slumber sand in too deep pockets but at least the wrinkles don't show when the skin is heavy and the windows have dirty faces there is a house on the cliff there it used to be my grave before being resurrected by the second coming of a highway headed south mostly and the salvation of vibration where the metal tattoo'd the pain of my new best friend with numbness _______________ daark scribblenote: postal on the coastal route south, on the rigid frame conjur [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-23-2006 10:08 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I think we have these codes and arrangements in our very own rooms...and you sir, seam the matters into a realistic contemporary of human heart and thoughts...well done! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
On the wind, echoes.... Stranger, in the rays of dawn where rock 'neath heaven looks upon the dancing waves which crest ~ then gone ~ with not one crease to seam or trace eternity on her timeless face. She willingly accepts the fates-- with faithful heart, lies and waits. ~ Karen ~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
My heart is stuck in my throat, reading those lines... |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
This one hit me Dark. with cross eyed foot correction It reminds me of when I was a kid and my crooked feet with those awful corrective shoes, lol. Your imagery is on the money as always. Great - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Lee J...thank you for taking the cotton' out of my scrip bottle with your read...it does rattle better now..thanks lady Lee J _____________ ms KL...thanks for the eyes lady friend..does it look like your window view? one of them places in my head I visit often. ______________ friend ED...yep...was thinking the same kind of shoes but for oldsters trying to find the straight and narrow in the middle of an 8 lane. Thanks guy!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"there is a house on the cliff there it used to be my grave before being resurrected by the second coming" Exquisite as usual Stranger. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah yes, the warm enclave of Burndown....it's such a pretty place, I hope they can keep it standing for a while this time! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady..thanks so much for the eyes _______________ sire ratguide, you smile me often with your reviews, thanks so much for them |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sometimes your stuff goes over my head DS. I mostly come to read your scribble notes.  And this one is one of my favs! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
bluzy...just a place up the coast in oregon where life and mist seem to melt together..highway drifts...thanks for the eyes lady |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...where face rock looks for a daughter's god and the footprints in sand of man are saliva soothed salty smooth for some dawn skin's eyes to follow... ~*~ You inspire. Oh yes. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
We used to take our doon buggy down there and tear up sand. I love that place, the Sealions Caves, the wildness of the waves on the rocks in September, the huge redwoods. Yes it's time to head down to Coos Bay again, I loved this! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS....The Oregon coast is really beautiful...your poem makes me want to visit it again soon.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine, thanks lady friend..you would love it there ______________ ms mysteria, yes...some of the seascape you speak of is in this penspeak..kinda _____________ ms martie, the same ocean as ours here, but it is just dressed different I guess. Thanks little neighbor |
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