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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2005-03-19 11:07 AM


~*~

I wonder
What holds the soul in place
A crackling fire in arcane space
Bare shoulders draped in morning soon
Set so aloft soft velvet moon

I wonder
What love weights my mind
This broken path the fates divined
Amid the pine to love you still
As seasons bloom in wintered will

I wonder
What inclined that such
Could stir the rivers filled too much
Embraced cohesive dream to dream
Mid melt that passions snow to steam

I wonder
What consumes in breath
The purple mist forsaking death
As all the more my thoughts explore
That trepid beats deep corridor

As if to suite with urgency that staggers vast the bold of me
A point of view combined times two that sways in disarrays of you
I wonder such courageous pages fan the land of forward ages
Giving bloom upon bare form, and gracing passage wild and warm

Copyright Kkh 03/19/04



© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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OH
1 posted 2005-03-19 11:13 AM


TD,
  WOW!  I wonder...how anyone could have such beautiful wonderings!  This is my absolute favorite of yours to add to the collection!
           miscee

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2 posted 2005-03-19 01:30 PM


Absolutely breathtaking Kathleen.
I now have a new favourite of yours!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-03-19 03:45 PM


Kathleen~

'I wonder
What holds the soul in place'


Now I ponder
in poetic wander
seeking the glue
that sticks mine too~

Thank you lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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4 posted 2005-03-19 06:54 PM


This was beautiful, my friend...very well could be your most so.

jwesley

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5 posted 2005-03-19 06:57 PM


wow!
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