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Elusive You
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Elusive You |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Elusive You See, it's Friday and disappointment waits between the lines of poetic thoughts and darkened dreams where winter walks will be colder to the touch of the sweetest of desires. I have no impact and feel the ugliness that comes with aging, the sagging ego, the wrinkled memories crumpled from over seeing the past, going borderline crazy decisionless but trying serenading myself with "why me". And then there is love whose definition is beginning to escape me. And so for you I am becoming that ghost, that phantom: A no physical reality me with an ever elusive you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
going borderline crazy decisionless but trying serenading myself with "why me". Im right with you at the border,tho when one toe passes over it,it is sometimes freeing ******************************************** I am becoming that ghost, that phantom: A no physical reality me with an ever elusive you. o, the elusive can be maddening |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I understand about ghosts |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wheewwww, amazingly tugging at the heartstrings...well done! Morning  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...wait! It's not Friday the 13th! Ah...I see beyond the pall... we need some sunlight in your life!  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Maureen Your words always touch me deeply. I wish for your much love and happiness throughout Christmas and the New Year. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Yep, yep, yep... A keeper for sure. I need this for a rainy day. JL |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ya' know sweet M that I pray for you find peace, joy and courage. But dang it you just keep writing pain so well. Fine, I double dog dare you to write an romantic piece just to prove you know... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, my friend, you are one of the best poets that I've ever read. Your work is always excellent, with perfection. Thank you. Hugs,  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely heartwarming piece I very much enjoyed reading it  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
"disappointment waits between the lines of poetic thoughts" Ouch, this one aches to the heart. Powerful words, I'm glad I didn't miss this. Hope you're doing well... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
wonderful write. truly heartfelt. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
One needs to reflect now and then move on..to better and happier moments. Your words are very touching A season's kiss from me  |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow...this was very emotional and heartfelt. I really enjoyed reading this one - thanks for sharing it with all of us. =0) -Kandi Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me. |
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