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Minor Mishaps of a Hurried March (scene 2)
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Minor Mishaps of a Hurried March (scene 2) |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going 
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metal monstrocoties line in rows of white paint surrounded by plowed ice mounds suspicious shadows fly across mirrors. Ice shatters across an unsuspecting cranium as familiar laughter abounds. parking lot greetings as punctuality tones fall into hurried ears. nice use of muffin |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, sounds like a snowball fight in a high school parking lot |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great piece! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Exellent write!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
Yes it is a snowball fight in a parking lot thank you for noticing. Also thank you everyone for stopping in. |
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