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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-05-03 10:04 AM


I know I'm just a copy that carries on the stain,
BUT I feel this emptiness and your pain.
I am your mirror image,
WHY waste time with this self battling scrimage?
I am so alike you in so many ways,
BUT we sit back and pass the days.
You made me what I am,
WHY try to stop me with your parental slam?
Happy we are with each other,
SO we're far from one another.
All these demons held you back,
GET away from me with your judgemental "slack".
I am...your mirror image,
I know I'm just a copy that carries on the stain...
I am...your creation..Zombie.

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-05-03 11:42 AM


Good write Kyle...slightly different for you..
but nonetheless enjoyed the read.
Hugs~


~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-05-03 12:34 PM


I relate, yeah
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
3 posted 2004-05-04 11:23 AM


You are yourself and you always have been...right from the moment you came screaming into this world. You may carry us in you but believe me boyo...you arent like your dad and even in my wildest dreams you arent like me (lol)...you ok?
Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion
4 posted 2004-05-04 11:53 AM


im dandy i was tired when i wrote that and you know me gotta have my music first thing in the morning so yeah my music had me writin that when i was tired
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