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You and I
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You and I |
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Crimson Moon Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 52NY, USA |
I tell myself We're just a game That there's nothing Our flirting is empty You wanted my number The call won't come I tried to tell them The friends who see stars Instead of blinding sun They say I'm crazy I need to give you credit You don't play games You're beyond that stage Males don't see the same Or think to say Sorry I can't make it They point out things I don't want to trust How you smile at my name The way you walk by So I know you're there Your need to touch me somehow Barest touch of my hand Or tickling my sides I feel like puberty Trying to figure out guys If women make a point to touch They're interested in the guy Is it vice versa too I never learned the rule You spend more time in my eyes Than staring down my shirt Everything about you Is different from what I know I wish I could let it show But I'm tired of losing I was a poet once and now I flounder in shallow water searching for my lost voice. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 love you sis |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*nodding* yep.. understood. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
sounds pretty good to me....you gotta let go of fear sometime...this seemsa good place to start |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Every now and then one comes along that I like...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed your writing. It sure can be confusing sometimes, huh. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Annie Shadow Junior Member
since 2004-05-02
Posts 27Drifting |
Very nice work. I liked your imagery in the piece. |
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Crimson Moon Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 52NY, USA |
Thanks everyone for all your support. I'm so used to being treated like one of the guys all this feels awkward. All I can do is write it out and hope it makes sense. |
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