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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2004-07-10 09:22 AM

(10/07/04)
© 2004 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Things were fin’ly looking up,
Had it all including love.
‘Till one terrifying morn’,
When you were suddenly gone.
You made it seem as it was all just in my head.
Not a breath wasted in your hurry to forget,
The day…

YOU WALKED AWAY, THOUGH IT WASN’T TOO LATE.
YOU WALKED AWAY, DIDN’T HAVE TIME TO WAIT.
FOR THE LOVE OF A BROKEN HEART,
WHICH YOU TORE APART.
THE DAY, YOU WALKED AWAY.

I hope you’re miserable too,
Because I am thanks to you.
Could have done without the pain.
Could have done without the rain.
Could have done with a simple goodbye but instead,
You left me like a dried up stain on the carpet.
The day…

Chorus

There’s a memory, of you and me,
Shredded to pieces somewhere.
But I’m still standing.
Though I’ve lost my mind, been left behind,
Clouded by haze of despair.
I’m still standing,
Standing strong.
All though…

Chorus

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

1 posted 2004-07-10 12:20 PM

I like this one...what kind of music do you play??

I see me frowning in your eyes...
I see the fear in you...
Where no one ever should be...

::From Autumn To Ashes::

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-07-10 03:14 PM

it was alright. it was pretty simple stuff. i'm guessing that this is an acoustic song. haha, johnny cash just popped into my head.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-07-10 10:47 PM

wow...this is a really cool song...i'm also wondering what kind of music you play.

~Alli~

I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2004-07-11 09:22 PM

Could have done without the pain.
Could have done without the rain.

could have done without these lines...

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

5 posted 2004-07-11 10:47 PM

I like this, and I also wonder what kind of music you play.
Jen

"The course of true love never did run smooth." -William Shakespeare

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